I'll have to disagree with you. I really like how you presented this I like the top. My only critique is that the arm is too short.

...I almost kinda wanna draw this myself.

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"Damned if you do, damned if you don't."

Thank you! Ahh you're right about the arm... Like cards? Yes, they are much fun n_n

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This is a crap sandwich. It is made of fail and AIDS.

Love the flow of the fabric. The realism in the puppy and bird are unquestionable. I also very much love the stomach area, very soft-painted renaissances-esque. I do, however, feel like the right (our right) hand is a bit awkward. The forearm is not long enough and therefore appears very blocky. Also the extremeties (mostly hands and arms) in comparison to the truck and head are a bit too small. The eyeshine also seems a but too much, however I still get the general direction in which she is looking. Anyways, the shading is impeccable and I would kill to be able to do the shading and especially fabric detail like you do! Wonderful picture Interesting clothes too

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Remember when they told you I didn't bite?

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